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Your Shadow

[Today is were your shadow is. Never fallow it, it knows what you don't. Lurking behind you, protecting. The day slithers while the nights are all glitter, like the sparkle in your eyes.]



Look to your left, maybe to your right.
There is something in the air, so i'm holding on tight.
Though your smile makes it right.
Sunshine, shinning down
Beaming all around, your cold ways have faded down.
I have yet to see you frown.
Up, up filling your soul
Now its over flown.
Spilling over onto our sheets. Now i can see.
I can see your need for me.
Hallow, hallow your my glass bottle.
Eyes so clear,
Filling me with your love.
Breathe, breathe in my air.
See that i'm still here. Never leaving, only being.
Being by your side.
What's that you see?
Running in circles,
Your Shadow.
Me.

Author notes

Yeh-
I wrote this at 5:15 am last night. Its kinda 'choppy' but i love it all the same.
xXx
Rose
Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • shadow7
    February 5, 2006
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    good write the title caught my eye so i just had to check it out and well worth it thanks for sharring,
    shadow

  • Nazrulith
    February 3, 2006
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    Well Done

    Yeah a good write indeed. So good job and keep it up.

  • Methusala
    February 2, 2006
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    Me too. I love everything uou do, and I wish you would write more, because I think everyone will agree that this is aweseome. I love you, Rose. Please call me soon... I miss you too much... and I guess that's why I get upset sometimes when I expect a call from you and don't get it... ~Love James