One night dear ole Father O'Malley
Spied a beautiful lass in an alley
He set vows aside
And went for a ride
Now he has a young daughter named Sally
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Option #4
Written February 2nd, 2006
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AH! I tempted Father. Now he's a father in two senses of the word! This was a good one. I'm happy you shared it in the contest. Great job and good luck.
~Kittii -
Cute, very cute. Ah, how I love limericks.
Keep writing and good luck! -
hilarious
ROFL
that totally made my day
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This made me smile this morning .
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excellent
A smile is just what I needed today. Thankyou! -
Long live limericks and especially ones as good as these. It is a fine piece in keeping with all the traditions of this ignoble form.
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Jim S -
Funny and well written.
Well that was short and sweet, not only for the reader but O'Malley as well !!! -
*laughs quietly* i liked it.
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very cute and uhm very short for you but yet still amazing and beautiful...luvmybabys...
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*laughs*
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interesting....very different....?? where did you get this idea? sorta funny though! okay keep it up buddy! xOx_Georgia.
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excellent
This is funny and cleverly written.I thought it was great, refreshingly different. -
this is so cute! Love it! So simple yet brings a smile to my face. Great job.
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
And yet, it's also quite true...at least, for some 'a those guys, anyway! lol
Very nice write Steve; you've once again proven that you can be funny in a non-vulgar way, which is very much refreshing here.
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