Tears of blood, run down my face,
My stupidity, they try to erase.
I broke your heart, with a flash of light,
And left you crying, in eternal night.
Bullets and knives, all over my floor,
Trying to take my pain, and feel no more.
But nothing helps, the pain inside,
Burning like wildfire, there's nowhere to hide.
I crushed your world, without a thought,
For breaking your love, darkness is what I got.
No amount, of death and pain,
Can fix your smile, or bring forth the healing rain.
Corrupted, I am, filled with cruelty,
My side I had hoped, you would never see.
With my last tear, the cold barrel to my head,
It's time for me to join, the Land of the Dead.
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I'm sorry, Tiffany!
Written February 5th, 2006
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that was a hard hitter
your an amazing writer
i cant wait to read the rest of your work
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Thankyou! I'm glad you liked my poem. It means a lot to me when people comment on my writing!
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Oh my God!! You didnt know what you were talking about when you said that you werent a good poet b/c I absolutely LOVED this!! Its like. . . . I could see it happening. . . almost like I was there or something. Aanyway, great, GREAT, GREAT, poem and keep up the good work!!
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that was really good I can feel the emotions that you have in this poem keep it up boy your doing good. see you at the group bye bye.
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I'm sorry, too, but not for the same thing. Don't worry about me, I'll be okay. And don't punish yourself over me. Not that you don't deserve it, just that it's a waste of time, because it won't fix anything.
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