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Big Brother

I love him,
and I worry about him.
It's been so long since I've heard him
truly laugh.
I try my hardest
to be there for him,
but no matter how happy he seems,
he's always on my mind.

Big Brother, if you're reading this,
you know who you are.
Just remember, no matter what,
I'll never leave your side.
I'll always be that
annoying little brat you love so
dearly.

And you'll always be my
Big Brother, even if we're
not -really- related. I'll
always look to you for help,
I can tell you anything, and
vice versa.

This song makes me think of you,
makes me hope for you. This song
I hear, it keeps the fire in me
burning. "Everything is gonna be
Okay," he says. And I know you're
all right.




Steven, my dearest Brother, I think of you always, and I wish for you nothing but the best your young life can possibly bring you.


              -Holly Baca (A.k.a. Lunatiq)

Author notes

This is (obviously) for my big brother. I feel he may not truly be happy, but I want the best for him, and he should know, even though I'm his *little* sister, I'll always be here for him.
Written February 6th, 2006

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  • Your Darkness
    July 14, 2006
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    I just realised I never commented on this, Angel! This poem means alot to me, and I hope you are doing awesome! I love ya' and Ill talk to you later. =)

  • April 23, 2006
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    hey holly who r u talking about
  • Queen Frostine
    February 15, 2006
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    i think a wrote a comment two times. if i did that's because there was a typo in the first one and it was bothering me. sorry.
  • Queen Frostine
    February 15, 2006
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    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh. how sweet. i've always wished i had a big brother.

  • Squirrel Dreams
    February 8, 2006
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    Wow Holly...this is amazing! I know what it's like to worry about someone like that, but really good write! My brain can't think of anything else to say...heh

    ~Da Freak
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