Wings of Love
Laughter rises in the air,
all the world seems just a dream,
and together we are; happy, content.
You look in my eyes and I in yours,
and all my heart hasn’t a care.
Just a smile it may seem,
but on my lips is a hint.
In my body my soul soars,
and I fly higher than I’ve ever dared.
Author notes
Written February 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- ~Love is in the air~ by N-c-g-a.
500 points, ended March 20, 2006, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I totally understand the feelings in this. It's that falling in love feeling and you think you must have wings. This is such a short write, but you captured the image and feeling together here.
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wonderful
the imagery is amazing, you can actually feel the love in the write. I love it.
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This is a lovely little write! I think what I liked most tho was the title. It got my attention right off and well I just had to read it. Am so glad that I did. Thanks for sharing this wonderful little write.
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Ty
Thanks for the comment on my poem! I appreciate the feedback.
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Tender and romantically sublime. Very well written as well. I love poems that are short and powerfully done with beauty
Best of luck in the contest.
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Very sweet - I love the imagery of flight throughout: especially, "laughter rising".
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awe
this is quite a short poem, yet you have expressed such a sweet and tender feelings within the lines of this one well done! thank you for sharing this poem and welcome to the sites of AllPoetry 
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