Left in the sweet confines
Of a mind that has you deluded
Maybe one day you'll watch yourself
From the outside in
Knowing nothing of misery
Yet playing a part
In a play written
By your imagination
Predicting every move
That the ones you know will make
Life is only a shock
Once you've realised your lack of power
Judging how we should be
Unkind, uncaring is how we may look
Yet in future you might take note
That the characters in your head are free to move
And move they will
To somewhere new
Where they need not be addicted
To caring for you
Author notes
mmm random thoughts- i kinda rhymed the last bit by accident but i left it there anyways!
Written February 9th, 2006
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wow pretty good i like it lot, i can see that its doesnt have to ryme to be really good. way to go.
fortunexx -
woah awesome write Rae
Good use of imagination
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