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time lesson

People dont change through the ages
only time
something forgotten by all the ages
during the time

if only time were to stay
people could be changed and taught
taught a lesson
a lesson learned by one generation

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got it from thinking of the 70s.. the hippies, peace and love. it seems the hippies got the point
Written February 10th, 2006

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  • PersephoneInWinter
    February 12, 2006
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    hehe yay hippies! it's cool how you incorperated them into a deep poem nice work!