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Happy Birthday Connie

Happy Birthday Connie

I slowly open my eyes and feel the pain (in my eyelids)
I can’t move my hands;
I’ve been paralyzed all over.
I saw my face on the door’s reflection,
Bruised and disfigured.
this is what love can do,
this love surely kills.
I can feel a pang of pain in my chest
created by the deadly stab of his birthday gift.
All I can remember are the last words he said,
before that sharp knife stabbed me deep
and my blood splattered on floor.
“Happy Birthday Connie, Rest in peace”
I can see his blur figure jump off from my balcony.
this will be my last birthday gift.
for there will be no more birthdays to come.

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Written February 12th, 2006

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  • Lionheart
    February 12, 2006
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    WOW! This is a terrifying poem. I certainly hope this didn't really happen. Did it? If it did, I am so very sorry my friend. If it didn'r, you have a brilliant imagination. Great Write, sweety
    Richard