I could feel it in your eyes,
You never really loved a soul.
You just wanted to leave your mark,
Carve your name inside there heart.
Make them bleed it all to you,
Never love another soul.
Mind games you perfected,
Every love you drove insane.
You loved the feeling,
Of being needed.
Still your mother left,
Your father hated you.
The blood in your family,
Born to be killers.
No one you love,
Ever gets out alive.
There is a game you like to play,
Crawl inside you lovers mind,
Carve your name deep inside.
Suicide you make the scream,
You always wonder into there dreams.
The master of minds,
You thought so divine.
Every man wanted you,
Even woman craved you.
Calling you a killer,
Is an understatement.
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Ok yep im open for any negative or positive feed back so say whatever u feel.
Written February 12th, 2006
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this was interesting. It is a great poem. are ya sure you have only been writing for a few monthes?
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I love this poem!!! your a good poet and i love the band silverstein!!! You are a really good poet for only writing for a few months so keep going and im me sometime!!!
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wow. great poem its funny how some people can just seem to kill you.
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i really like this. Thanks for your comment... just so u know somebody has saved me.
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wow...dh dun na... what are you trying to tell me there buddy, what ever you do dont try to kill me butthole!
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brillant work on this piece keep writing silverstein
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great!
Wow, great write! It's so mysterious and cunning. I love this line:
Crawl inside you lovers mind,
Carve your name deep inside.
Thats amazing. Ur such a great writer, luv ya, byz! -
Well writen.
I really enjoyed this poem..
it reminded me of something I watched on discovery channel yesturday.. About a killer who killed all of the wifes he had..
Anyways, very intresting and good poem.
It was well writen.
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