A chance to live
to find a friend
A gift of song
Of joy and life
A life that rhymes
to bells that chimes
For bread of brokens
And of the fallens
A beauty that loves
to the wings of doves
A manner of love
for the great above
A dream that sings
to the cold springs
A thanks for reading
of the foolish feeling
A symbol of emotion
without a connotation
A product of brainstorming
Of fullness and emptying
A write of chance
made from a solemn glance
Author notes
Just smile and laugh at it ...silly as ever or better applaud this foolish stuff.heheheheheheheheheeee
Written February 13th, 2006
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Oh...you're so great and thank you so much! Now, I realize that funny things are needed also to be seen. I really appreciate you...
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I think I'm off my 'A' game because I didn't see anything funny. However, I do like the couplets. It's a beautiful format for most ideas. I especially liked this little team:
"A gift of song
Of joy and life"
Write on! -
it is alll about you
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what is the point of this?
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nice piece of work
I LIKE IT!!!!
thanks 4 ur comment on my work -
oh...thank you for reading my work.
Ever grateful,
Alfred -
great stuff!
i really enjoyed reading this!
B
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I agree with Lady...I think it is sort of like reading someone'e thoughts...as you glide through this write.
Thanks for reading my work..and I will
at you...and leave you with an applause since you asked me nicely.
Cheers..and keep writing....
LIZ -
Thank you so much!
I'm not that great and excellent writer.
I have always a trouble with grammar.
God Blees! -
This is an excellent write. You did a well done job! I loved it!
Take Care,
x PatientGrace x
Jasmine
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Thanks for your appreciation...I love you for it...I really love suprises because it is like a rainbow that can makes me Glance with the beauty of the Infinite...Thanks.
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gah!.. it didn't work
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This is really .. interesting.
It reminds me of a game (perhaps it's that image on the side, that smile that's setting me aside). Final Fantasy, it doesn't matter what one, though I'd pick on a few more of the current ones. There is always a scene of a male and female through fields and being happy and laughing and playing.
This isn't the surprise, this is just something to work up to the surprise. To be honest, I hope it's enough. -
Thank you so much!...Diabl....
thank you...will you click and read it again...
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Thank you so much LadyUnique.
It is truly a rumbling thoughts...Brainstorm to be particular.
Your so Kind.
Evergrateful,
Herman
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there IS a quirkiness in this poem, that makes one read it more than once...i liked it
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i like the bit of humor in this it's kind of like being able to read someone's mind as they go through rambling thoughts.
nicely done
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