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~ Lost In Love



Tell me how do I... how do I follow this lonely track...
Road that is taking me so... So far from you
The path waiting ahead is so lorn and dark
While my pace breaks and the ride gets so slow...

I can't understand... where we went wrong
What did I do that made you say goodbye
Trying to settle things down, I’ve gone insane
Trying to resist my tears, I just cry and cry

All the time... Every second of the day
Missing your love... missing your presence
Restless poisonous nights have worn my soul
While I try to figure out things, to make sense

Baby... oh baby tell me did I deserve this end
Did I deserve to be forsaken and left all alone?
I’ve tried to be the person I was once upon a time
But I can’t make my self believe you are gone....

Can’t believe after so many lovely years
Breaking up like we never knew each other before
You may go on with life, forget all about me, but
My love I can’t help wanting you even more and more....

~*~

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Written February 17th, 2006

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  • Lostariel gold member
    November 30
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    Oh wow. This is so sad. So beautiful at the same time.


  • Lonely
    July 26, 2006
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    thank you very much for the comment lillcexyangel

  • xxlilcexyangelxx
    July 26, 2006
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    I had a problem similar like that,your poems tell a story and this one i know.Its great work.I'm going to read it again at least 3 times.I'm sorry though.Love...sigh...It tears us apart yet we still want more.good work.

  • mina nagi
    February 18, 2006
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    When you love someone from heart, breaking up is not easy to put up with... you've penned your gloomy feelings beautifully.... I really feel sorry for you and may God give you courage to cope with the situation...
    mina