by ~Gregg Rowe~
above rainy days
we summer soar to see stars
moon, sun and rainbows
Author notes
Senryu:
Senryu, or human haiku include only references to some aspect of human nature (physical or psychological) or to human artifacts. They do not address seasons or nature as in primary Haiku.
laughter echoes haunt
axed jobs silence absent friends
listening I mourn
Written by: Tracy Lynn Repchuk
© Canadian Federation of Poets
Written February 17th, 2006
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Oh ok
I'm never that good at forms myself, it'd be interesting to learn a little more however- so thanks for providing an explanation of senyru.
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I just realized I totally messed this one up with the requirements of the definition. I have to go back to the drawing borad and try this again! lol
Edited on Mar 02, 1:55 because ''. -
Good imagery
Keep writing I liked this a lot Nice use of sibilance here too
All the best
Your friend
Pozo
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