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don't go

why
why do i just wake up each day
hoping against hope to just fade away
into a place i once knew
into a world
in which i'm completely surrounded by you

why
why is this so strange
to think this through
and know i'm the same

why
why do i slowly slip
when you're standing there
within arm's reach
and still i can't get a grip

don't
don't let me go
you're all that's left
you're all i know

wait
wait don't say goodbye
this world breaks me down
with all its faults,
broken promises,
and lies

you
you are all that's left for me
without you i don't know what i'd do
i don't know where i'd be

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its crazy
Written February 17th, 2006

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  • Shannon62875
    February 17, 2006
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    wow!! this is really good i love it.. you did an awesome job expressing how you feel.. and leaving kind of a mystery at the end... AWESOME! keep up the great work

    Shannon*Leah
  • juggalettetoimdie
    February 17, 2006
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    hey that was really good!!!