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Sensing Together

Look into my blue eyes
See beauty reflected in my
Tears of pleasure
Beholding a treasure
Beauty beyond belief
My soul's desperate relief

Touch my hand tenderly
Feel the warmth gently
Caressing your skin
Penetrating your soul within
Drawing your body close
Time itself slows

Hear my whispers of affection
In this moment of perfection
Listen for words unspoken
To mend our hearts once broken
Tender are the words of love
Given from the Father above

Taste the goodness of our God
To whom we give our laud
For bringing us to this moment
Together for this pleasant
Embrace of our kindred spirits
An eternity in a few minutes

Smell the sweet fragrance
Of our devote reverence
To the one who brought us
Together to trust
In Him and each other
To be for one another

Author notes

It's late. I'm can't sleep. What comes out of my mind at those times.
Written February 18th, 2006

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 19, 2006
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    excellent~

    I agree this romantic and spiritual
    Late night poems like this when one can't sleep are the best in my book...
    Loved this poem sweetie
    Reflects the goodness and beauty of your soul
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~

  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    February 18, 2006
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    spectacular

    Hear my whispers of affection
    In this moment of perfection
    Listen for words unspoken
    To mend our hearts once broken
    Tender are the words of love
    Given from the Father above

    that is so awesome!!! you reminded me of the book in the Bible: Song of Solomon--the most romantic love story ever written. it is full of romance and is completely reverent to our Creator. Great Job!!!

  • mzladyt
    February 18, 2006
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    This is beautiful. Great job. Maybe you should do more writing late at night?
  • froglover
    February 18, 2006
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    awesome

    Wow! You have managed to be both romantic AND spiritual in the same poem! This is awesome! Thank you for sharing this.