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Tough Love

built up
cant let you win
hiding things
is not a sin
crying now
dont let it show
passive
is the way to go
avoided glares
you saw my face
run away
without a trace
playing games
oh who can win?
once youre in
you cant get out
they've got you trapped
cant scream or shout
its called tough love
without a doubt

Author notes

I seem to be writing this way a lot lately.
Written February 18th, 2006

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  • VentulusFamosus
    February 19, 2006
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    awesome write!!! The rhyming was pretty cool. very deep poem, loved it!