Small hands, grasping each other, don't want to let go.
Leafs fall about their heads.
Their lips touch so lightly, and smile, for this will always last.
Author notes
I hope you like it
Written February 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- 3 lines of beauty by Red Shoes.
300 points, ended February 27, 2006, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so sweet! It really puts it in perspective. I mean, I did like some people when I was younger quite a bit, but I never considered it love. I always thought finding your true love so young was adorable! Nicely put hun!
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Thank you very much.
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Nostalgic and Sweet
*FINAL COMMENT BEFORE JUDING* This was a lovely entry. Those first loves when we are so young and innocent contrasted with autumn leaves was interesting. Thank you again for your entry and the happy memories it created. -
This sounds so pretty but I don't know what it is talking about.
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Awwww... beautiful piece. This also reminds me of my first boyfriend. Wonderfully done.
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This is so sweet. It reminds me of lovely Fall days in my childhood with my friends. ahh... nice memories.. Thanks
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Thank you
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This was like the two sweet hearts depicted within,short bit oh so sweet
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Wow, this reminds me of my first boyfriend, and it is so sweet how yo worded this and kept it short.
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Thank you! They called it that with me too. :}
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Thank you for your entry....
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This is so sweet! I remember my first crush at 8 years and it was so deep! (and they called it puppy love )
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