Phones don’t ring anymore
no mails from my inbox
nobody’s knocking on my door
seasons changed,
my heart still hurting.
I played our favorite song
a thousand times,
hoping it will bring back some sweet memories
but all I got is this piercing feeling that I miss you
and I can’t go on like this anymore.
I want to ask just one question before I let you go,
Are you still mine? and If you still are, take me home with you.
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Written February 19th, 2006
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huhuhu
[sorry just can't help it]
i could so relate to this
what's up with ummm our guys
i found this guy who rocked my universe
and suddenly its nada on him
and i've been missing him like hell
atleast they must give us the closure
and not let us sulk like a lost puppy
musing, moping and not coping
cause it's not amusing...uy
atleast, have the guts to say its over
Are you still mine?
and If you still are, take me home with you.
I love the last part
I guess it takes a woman to be so much in love
to tell this to a guy she loves
whew!


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im going through the exact same thing at the moment...ur words describe exactly how i'm feeling...especially playing the favourite song!! great write! kxox


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aww this is really good.... Keep it up!!!!
Jessieboo


