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When do I wake up?

Is there anyone out there?
Cause I'm screamin for help,
but there's no answer
I bleed but no one cares
No one is there to pick me up when I fall,
why will no one see that im dying inside.
Weeping toxic tears while bearing the thought of living.
Wanting something so bad that you'd die for it,
but you can't have it.
Mutilating yourself just to feel the only pain that you can control.
Tearing into the olny security you have,
only to be disappointed.
Everyday is just a bad nightmare but when do I wake up?

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Written February 20th, 2006

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  • D34D1337f00
    June 25, 2006
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    hey whats up yeah i remember you how could i forget =P do you have a myspace???
  • Pyro-Paige420
    February 27, 2006
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    damn its been a while but i dont have long distance, if you want you can call me my # is 252 353 0621

  • Ravon
    February 22, 2006
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    i care sweety, u know it 4 sure, good job, keep it up, i love ya -Raye

  • I am Suicidal
    February 21, 2006
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    if u forgot my number it is 817-636-2815

  • I am Suicidal
    February 21, 2006
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    hey u can always call me i will actually talk to u i miss u

  • bradleyAwray
    February 20, 2006
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    very sad and well written but i think you mispelled dieing, I believe it is spelled dying,besides that it is a great poem.

  • grannyeri gold member
    February 20, 2006
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    Very heart wrenching poem you have penned here - feel the pain you describe. No one two words, only.

  • Tearsofblood16
    February 20, 2006
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    this si very good. its also deep and sad keep it up amber

  • Decorus Somnium
    February 20, 2006
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    Oh God!That was very sad!I love it a lot!It's awesome,really!I really liked the end.
    Keep Writing
    Best Wishes
    ~LostMermaid~
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