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It's that real

Can't u see, these wandering eyes yearning for more
this world should have so much more to offer than:
Pain
Rejection
lies
Un-achevied dreams
i WANT so much more.
i want to be some1 to somebody
not just:
that guy
who
girls know
they can
captivate
enchant
AND
lead
on
and
forget
so easily
i'm never here for the right reasons
Reabound of the year material
and so sick of
my unrelenting vacancy

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Written February 23rd, 2006

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