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already half way killed

nothing left
in an unfit world
and nothing turns out right

fear tears me apart
so i've got nothing to hold on to
you've already killed me half way

but nothing is right here
you don't know what to do
i'm so lost now
knowing that i've lost you

i don't know you
i don't ever think i will
together we fall apart

sleeping is so pointless
only to bring dreams of you
in times when this was okay
and i still knew what to do

i forgot who i was then
when i could be so strong
to just say no and walk away
you were someone else too
so now i'm gone

i break at your whim
i'm only okay when you choose
i don't think i understand
and i deffinately don't love you

Author notes

bladagjksaghka i hate the world and most of the creatures in it at the moment. i also hate this poem. grrr don't judge my ability as a poet on this please i beg of you just read soemthign not so shitty
Written February 25th, 2006

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  • XKornXChildX
    March 11, 2006
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    Blah. You Liar. This Poem Is Good. Oh Shit. I Just Remember I Was Suppose To call You, Haha. I'll Call When Hala Is Done Vacccccuuuuummming haha.
    <33 Sara Jane