It was crush on the sunset boulevard
The world was so blissful for a while
I could have touched the first evening star
Seduced by your sweet words and smile
It was journey of some unforgettable years
A path where life was young and bright
A blessed road where rain fell with pride
But it was me who was forsaken in the night
It was heartbreak with a single word
As the purple clouds gently passed by
The tide was high and the wind so low
It was me... who was left alone to cry
It was love that ruined my peaceful life
The strength to carry on, I cannot find
Admitting my defeat, recalling the memories
Every night I repent and cry myself blind...
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Author notes
This poem is inspired by a wonderful poem by my very dear sister Sally, Willow on allpoetry..
Written February 25th, 2006
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Aww. So beautiful. I must check out your sister's work as well! Will definitely get to her page as soon as I can!
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thank you very much for your lovely comment
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Impressive write, Very interesting in it's own way. Truth and meaning behind it all. I loved these lines
I could have touched the first evening star
Seduced by your sweet words and smile
Thanks for sharing your talent with me, Keep penning. Take care now.
victoria
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Wow! I loved this poem, it's amazing. Love the last line, leaves so much open.
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Kee hoya?
Side effects of Lovearia very well depicted
mina
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this write brought tears to my eyes. you leave the end of love open for the reader to fill in. also the same goes for the reason why the love ended. i'm not saying you should have put your own reasons in...let the reader imagine
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wow. i love this poem. well written.
i love the first line "It was crush on the sunset boulevard". it's so sweet.
keep writing --katie
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