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Tranquility

A familiar tune weaves through my fingertips
I welcome the soothing song as it heals internal wounds-
Tranquility washes over me.

A stream covered in soft pink lilies gently flows,
The water glimmering in the sun,
like a crystal chandelier.

The light spray tickles my toes

I welcome this peace and let my voice sing
My soul flies away; purity; I am free

A clear sky darkens
stars beaming down on the waters surface

It's time to go home

My song gradually diminishes,
into a magical wisp of dust.

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Written February 26th, 2006

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  • Twisted-illusions
    March 1, 2006
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    thankyou!
  • Twisted-illusions
    March 1, 2006
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    thankyou very much

  • Sai Babas Lotus
    February 28, 2006
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    Ahhh...this is beautiful with wonderful imagery, alliteration, tranquil as is its name and soothing to the soul and spirit. I enjoyed this immensely at the end of a tired day, today, just when I needed it most.

    Thanks so much and best of luck in all you do,
    Charishma

  • Mystical-Gardenia
    February 28, 2006
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    Delightful!

    Lovely, peaceful rendition of the soul Truly enjoyable Reminding us each how to find the song in our soul Wishing you much success in all of your endeavors thank you for your submission