I've grown afraid of the sunlight
it shines down revealing my scars
Naked and vulnerable I stand-
you search through my mind
tearing me down with your abstract thoughts
Now you've seen how I really feel
Your carelessness cuts through me
like ice on a broken bones-
I'm numb
but I'm used to it.
Can't someone save me from this,
realm of emptyness?
they have all turned away,
abandoning me.
Suicidal whispers
Why must you scream at me?
Haunting memories
Can't you see?
I can't breathe
These days become darker
These days become darker
Author notes
This is a mixture of some of the choices really.\
Enjoy.
Written February 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- Deep Dark & Depressing by BldyWristBroknHeart.
300 points, ended February 28, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like the imagery and the dark emotions of this piece. I am dropping in for a parlour visit and read your homepage....i love to walk in the dark
nice flow andwhen i read this aloud even better...The single word of the title NAKED strips bare the body to the truth of the person. 'Suicidal whispers' beautiful so many images in provokes and takes my imagination on a journey in those two words alone. brilliant...thank you for the pleasure of this read.
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Just like it for an unknown reason...
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Thankyou!
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I'm numb
but I'm used to it.
those were my favorite lines, i relate to well to that feeling, numb and frozen but used to it. great words this is really good and your word choice was amazing and created a realy nice dark tone. good luck in the contest
best wishes
Sarah
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