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In My Heart Forever

You’ll…......be in my heart forever

                          You’ll always be my love

Be…….......my heart and soul’s endeavor

                          Be the one I’m thinking of

In…….....…happy times or times of pain

                          In everything we share

My…….......passion for you will remain

                         My love is always there

Heart…......that’s full of love sublime

                         Heart that will be true

Forever.....is a long, long time

                         Forever I’ll love you


            Dearest…

                        You’ll be in my heart forever

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Written March 1st, 2006

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  • roxie mae
    March 9, 2006
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    im thanking you for writing this. becouse it was amazing!. it is exactly how i feel about my love towards my special someone and its perfect. i absolutly loge how you put this peice together. the word flow perfect together. great,great write!! keep it up!
    your friend.
    Roxie

  • bedazzled
    March 9, 2006
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    Wow I loved this! You worked this down to an art! Well rhymed, sweetly worded, good rhythm, masterfully executed - what else can I say? Perfect.

  • angelica silver member
    March 6, 2006
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    Good one Steve, you've done a marvellous job with this style, well done

    Hugs Joan

  • getsbetter gold member
    March 6, 2006
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    Man! you got the style perfect. the poem is great as well. good luck in the contest steve, GETS

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 2, 2006
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    A moving message that was worth repeating.
    Well written.
    Jim S
  • UnspokenPain
    March 2, 2006
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    This is absolutely awesome! I love it! So nice and sweet....about anyone in paerticular? Another awesome write...good luck in the contest.....xOx_Georgia.

  • Shakes-spear
    March 2, 2006
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    This is quite good, but nothing less than I would expect from you! I liked this a lot. Great job my friend, The Shaker
  • montez gold member
    March 1, 2006
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    You big old softie!
    I'm not one for messing around with different forms, but you've done well here old lad.
    Robin.

  • Parearoo
    March 1, 2006
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    Lovely!

    AWESOME!! Wow!
    If all guys did something like this for their girls, I don't think there would be any more divorces in the world!
    This is a freakin' awesome peice of work; one that you should be proud of!
    Keep up the great work, and keep in touch!
    -Holly
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