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Tears Fall

*Tears fall from my eyes,
Like the rain falls from the skies,
There’s no explanation,
For this sensation,
I feel that there’s nothing left,
I’m the victim of the worst kind of theft,
Where did your feelings for me go,
I hope someday they’ll show,
Then I can smile,
I haven’t done that in a long while,
Reminisce,
That one true kiss,
Is all I need,
So that once again I can breathe,
And go on just one more day,
I pray that our love never fades away,
But yet I think it’s already taken a fast pace,
I’ve been replaced,
That’s why you hear these cries,
And see the tears fall from my green eyes*

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Written March 2nd, 2006

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  • Grabthyhand
    March 16, 2006
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    thank you so much...i also enjoy your work a lot
  • J Wolf
    March 15, 2006
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    Reminisce is one of my favorite words and I love how you put it by itself. Great design and great job.
    Edited on Mar 15, 10:02 p.m. because ''.
  • Grabthyhand
    March 4, 2006
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    it sorta came to me lol but thank you
  • Grabthyhand
    March 4, 2006
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    thank you
  • justsay maybe
    March 2, 2006
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    very nice. you portray your feelings very nicely here.

  • smileywiley22
    March 2, 2006
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    great job!
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