Darkness falls on lonely hearts,
as clouds roll 'cross the sky.
The rain a stinging memory,
in my twilight eyes.
The chilling mist a deathly voice,
of a dream once held gone.
Darkness my companion,
in the hours just 'fore dawn.
For sunlight my only savior,
comes to pull me free.
The misty dreams and memories,
with shadows will they flee.
But with night and the ivory moon,
the mist comes again.
My solitary companion,
and long forgotten friend
Author notes
Written April 29th, 1997
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Great write! Thanks for entering
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great rhymes, flows smoothly & I like the subject & voice...creates a dark, eerie feeling full of shivers
I enjoyed reading
thanks for entering -
Ohh, I loved this piece!!!!
I really did! I think you did a fantastic job here!!! Well done!!
I loved the part:
"But with night and the ivory moon,
the mist comes again.
My solitary companion,
and long forgotten friend "
I thought that was perfect!! Well done!
*hugs*
Luv,
Lee
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