There is a deep sea behind these smiling eyes
A past that follows me everywhere like shadow
Whosoever I approached to unfold my heart
Comes forth at once with his own tale of woe
So it is through this painful pen that I always unveil
The tale of a heart that is so full of life, yet so eerily sad
Lonesome have been the paths that I ever took
Hollow were all the desires that I ever had
Been bruised and forsaken by dearest friends
Betrayed by the love that I thought was true
No matter how much I try, I can no more be “me”
Overrated and fake were the joys I knew
So it ends up with the same old story of life
Deserted by the life I once knew, endless are my fears
Here stops the heartbeat of youth that once lived in me
Tale of this silent heart ends here, sealed with tears...
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Written March 6th, 2006
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Goodness gracious me! You know what I am going to say now right? This is amazing! I love it. Bravo! I stand in awe, yet again!
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deep sea, the silence realted to it, then the relation of tears within eyes , hidden from all and all those pains along them , buring one's soul from inside , yet one smiles to the world, yet he seems so careless so happy, but very few know what is inside...i liked the idea of past and shadow, both dark and both following ...and those lines just made an impact well on my mind
"Whosoever I approached to unfold my heart
Comes forth at once with his own tale of woe"
so true isnt it! u never see a single person who is holow enough to engulf all ur painful thoughts in his heart, they all got a sea of desires and wishes that were never meant to come true, filled to their fullest, but yet the search does continues
being someone who u know exsists is pretty hard and sometimes its pretty easy, but accepting all of the pains and lonliness together is something that hurts, but even then one can pay the price by bearing all those pain , all those harsh memories if given the choice to be back at the point when it all started, makes u think that why life doesnt have a rewind button?!
and ultimately the point where it seems like nothing matters now ... a point where love and hate seems alike ... a null point!... the end of the sensous heart beat...
i can go on and on on this one...
what can i say about this other than its B E A U T I F U L ! -
thank you very much for the lovely comment dear friend
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very nice
"Here stops the heartbeat of youth that once lived in me
Tale of this silent heart ends here, sealed with tears.."
Lovely lonely, your heart is strong because of thoughts of love residing in it all the time. Youthful you are ever and tears of joy await you always. with love,ceegee.
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I really liked this!!.. I loved the title, I loved the flow everything about it was perfect!!.. You did an excellent job with this.. You have such talent, I hope to read more from you very soon!!
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touchy
what a talent with smooth flow of ifea and image.
it's like telling my story.
KEEP IT UP
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