help me find a place
in societies vindictive ways
set out by the heartless and vain
who's life every person craves
help me find a place
among the rich and famous
who spit on the poor skum of the earth
who's simple nature shame us
help me find a place
where i can belong as me
no more hiding behind the masks
i need a place where i can feel free
help me find a place
somewhere loving and kind
no more living in the rain
where intelligence is undermined
help me find a place
that welcomes me with open doors
like a family in good fortune
where i cannot be ignored
help me find a place
in societies vindictive ways
somewhere safe and loving
something that i crave
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Written March 6th, 2006
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Hmm, Very nicely written. The irony is that the folk that it seems really aimed at, the climbing middle classes and neauveu riche, would never understand it? Well put and I think it also points wonderfully towards how uncaring the world we live in today has become.
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good
I like this in parts it flows great not saying the full poem doesen't it proberbly flows great when u read it but i am not a good reader still i liked this alot first poem i have read of ur's i think but ur good peace paul
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