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The Time is NOW


As we reflect on our journey
Our hopes and desires must be fulfilled
We come and we pray
We look to the sky for comfort

Life begins anew each day
The cries, soft, but never forgotten
Brave souls fight for life
As echos grow fainter

Hands are taken to reach out
Freedom is in the midst
Energy runs through our body
Blessed are those who are in need

The time is now
Think positively and be happy
Let your heart open
Be true to yourself


Author notes

This isn't that good, I know, but we just have to try to take life seriously because it can all end before we know it.
Written March 7th, 2006

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  • rhymingoof
    May 6, 2006
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    right on,Kristina. no one knows better than i, just how easy it would have been to lose faith and close my heart. But for the Grace of God,(and two earth angels), go I. Thanks for showing me the time is now to be positive,open and true to myself. i've been a wreck lately, but eternally grateful for your support-greg.

  • Deke
    March 8, 2006
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    Very good Kristina--Long time no see.
    Deke/Damon

  • angelica silver member
    March 7, 2006
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    Darling Kris,
    Most definitely open up your heart and be happy, live life to the fullest, we all have our ups and downs, but make sure there are more UP'S than DOWN'S Life goes by so quickly, so enjoy it with every part of your being. A lovely poem Kris be proud of it for as Hugh says both you and Kal show a lot of wisdom for your young age. I'm sorry your lovely budgie died, he is with his mate now.

    Love and hugs
    Joan

  • hugh wyles silver member
    March 7, 2006
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    Dear Kristina,
    This seems like a series of statements which, however, convey thoughts of great wisdom from one so young.
    Life is not to be taken lightly fot, to mortals, it is God's most precious gift. However, it is also to be enjoyed for to take it too seriously, dwelling on the darker side and missing the joys, is to fail in the gratitude we owe to Him for all his blessings.
    You are right to "think positively and be happy".
    Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh.
  • nightscare
    March 7, 2006
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    i love this. it is great i wish i could write as good as you.
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