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Let The Sea Undress Us

We take An evening stroll along the beach.
A lighthouse beckons us with its twirling light.
A moon so big, it seems within reach.
It bathes us with it’s intoxicating white.
All my dreams are coming true tonight.
One smile from you and I am made a slave.
That one look has caused all my passion to ignite.
I am here to satisfy everything that you crave.
I will drift across you like a cool refreshing wave.

I see a most curious look spread across your face,
and suddenly you run off through the tide-kissed sand.
I watch for just a moment and then I take up chase.
We’re in the shallow water now, but wait! I think I understand.
I have fallen for exactly what you have planned.
You turn around and  tackle me into the splashing ocean
I’m now pinned down  under your command.
Everything seems as if its playing in slow motion.
You pull me in and kiss me hard releasing all of my emotions.

As we continue our kiss I roll over you to switch positions.
I kiss your cheek and neck among the whispers of my intent.
My hands have found the buttons of your shirt, call it intuition.
I slowly open your shirt and move to begin my descent.
My fingers trail down your stomach in a pleasurable torment.
You unclasp your bra as I work to free your jeans.
The waves carry off your undergarments. No time now to lament.
My shirt too was swept away. Swallowed by the endless green.
I stand above you now as you untie my shorts reaching in for things unseen.

Your eyes promise no escape as you stare up at me.
You have me in your hands and you slowly lean in.
The anticipation is staggering so I lock my knees.
Your tongue twirls around my tip as you begin.
This amount of ecstasy surely must be a sin.
Your lips build pressure as you increase motion and speed.
I feel I may burst from the mounting pleasure within.
I pull away from you ending my greed.
It’s time for me to give you all that you want and need.

The remaining clothes form a pillow as I lay you on the sandy shore.
Positioned between your legs I lightly kiss your breasts.
Every part of you, I will eventually explore.
My tongue moves steadily down your body unsuppressed .
I crave your taste! Moving lower, ever lower! I’m obsessed!
Finally I sink inside you with my tongue.
One hand holds your leg the other’s upon your chest.
I take my time. My lips massaging you. This night is ever young.
Through your moans my love for you is sung.

You scream for me inside you so I move back up to face you.
I lock my eyes with yours as I push deep between your thighs.
I start out moving slowly, at first you seem as if subdued.
So I thrust in harder causing you to arch and rise.
The power of my motions amplifies your cries.
A warm wave of sea water splashes onto my back.
A very refreshing and much needed surprise.
I focus my mind to stay on track.
Together as one there is nothing here we lack.

You grab onto my shoulders as I drive into you hard.
I gently bite your neck and kiss your ear.
You’re tightening your grip as I continuously bombard.
You must be getting close now and so I’ll persevere.
I can feel deep inside that you’ll soon be switching gears.
Suddenly you tense up and so I give you the rest of my power.
There is no mistaking the climax of pleasure that I hear.
I say a silent thank you that I could be with you this hour.
Then give into the warm sensation of you my beautiful flower.

Author notes

This is poem I put together for one of my good friend's birthday. I only got about a week to fin tun it. I haven't spent a lot of time on it so transitions are a little choppy. It's a bit lengthy but I know she wouldnt want me to leave out any details. Anyhow, any comments or suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
Written March 8th, 2006

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  • Cannonsfire gold member
    June 30

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    Well this kept me company while you were eating lol...and you said you didn't know how to do it sensually?? Pffft...this is exquisite, felt I was there Love, C


    • Weltt
      July 1
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      Don't read this!!! old and crappy!
      • It's not crappy! Its a practiced thing, the more sensual you write the better you become, this has the hallmarks of being so beautiful all you have to do is revisit sometime and rework, you can make gold from silver you know and I would help you C
  • very good! i thought that i was gonna end up being one of the characters! i think you'll be in the top 4...

  • breathtaking!
    that was amazing. i felt as if i was there.
    beautiful job!

  • HeartTangles gold member
    March 12, 2006
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    Very beautifully written and certainly breathtaking. I admire your writing and thoughts.

  • establishedjune86
    March 8, 2006
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    amazing

    Wow, that was amazing. It was interesting because being a gay man I normally don't read poems about str8 people making love, but as I was reading it I couldn't tear my eyes away. It was just beautiful, the words and the movement. The images were strong and powerful. It shocked me, but in a pleasant way. Very good job. I am extremely impressed with the way it was written and am very gald to have read it.

  • Lil Langston
    March 8, 2006
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    Poetic Pwnage

    Very Passionate!!!! And tasteful as well!!! Nice Write!! Thanks for sharing.
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