The needle of death,
Penetrating in a tainted womb,
Sucking out the fruit of union,
Ripping the creature from its right for life.
How many times such a thing happened?
How many times it has it happened in privacy?
How many lives have been lost
Due to such silent-murders?
Hundreds, loads and tons
Have lives been stolen........
Innocent lives lost and broken
Due to selfishness and desires..........
A game for the adults
Polluting the teenage years,
A pleasure of minutes
To satisfy the needs of the young.
After the pleasure comes the suffering;
In the first two months
The girl gets sick,
And in shock is revealed the being.
Forcefully rejecting it,
Her parents pay a price....
Get a doctor to operate and abort the baby
For the family to keep its pride.....
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Written March 10th, 2006
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I always write with emotion and this poem is one of my best. I personally think so at least, since it really was done purely on emotion (after seeing a whole class arguing about it...).
Still, am glad that you like the poem. It's hard to keep it flowing, though I will go on...:3 -
Give yourself time, my dear friend. Just write with your heart as you have done here. It's the best kind of poetry.
This poem is all so very true. Life is so very precious and there are millions that have never had a chance to see it and live it! A wonderful job. Keep the ink flowing always. I know how hard that can be sometimes. Love and hugs...
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Thankyou, I really am glad that you appriciate this one.
Hmm...in the state I am currently in at the moment, I wonder if I can write something romantic and sweet. It's something I admire in others...however, I am a Dark Poet and love is something that I still am seeking which is something like...impossible to reach. I write with feelings and I still have not felt such a thing...it's been too long since I did anyway. -
Thankyou, I really am glad that you like this one and much more thanks for applauding.
I wish I could submit more but I'm limited to two everyday...shucks, coz I can't afford a membership.
I'll be having more later on today, so I hope you'll stay tuned. :3 -
awesome write
from one so young what a wonderful expressive poem. life is precious and just love the ending what a social statement and unfortunately at times so very true. i like the way this poem flowed and i for one am looking for more of your work. awesome -
Thanks alot, glad you liked this poem. ^_^
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well said
very well expressed for someone your age. a tough debatable topic for so many, pro life/ pro choice. I think your word choice was great and you voiced your opinion in a very poetic way, Lavender
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