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Look at what             You
have done to
me. You don't
care that
you've                   Hurt
me, you've
killed                    Me
on the inside.
You've given
me pain,                  So
excruciating,
it drove me to
insainty. It was
that                      Bad.
I bled for you,
spilled tears,
swallowed
anger.
                         But
for some
reason,                   I
can't get
over you.
You stay in my
mind.
                        Still,
I hate to
love you.
Never have you
given me real            love.  
There is just
something
about                     you
that keeps me
loving.

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Written March 14th, 2006

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  • Closet Poet
    March 18, 2006
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    brilliance my freind. I LOVE it! it describes so many things in it, the annoyance at still ... having feelings for someone whos hurt you so much, loving them even when youve known what theyve done to you. its hardbto deal with. well done on a great write hunni, cya round soon! closet