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Colours

 

If I could paint the sky, I would coat it in cherry red
A ruby as sweet as your lips,
And as red as the blood that sings through my veins

 

If I could stop time and everything that matters,
I would find a quiet place to lie
Then let you take my hand and heart,
To keep them safe with yours

 

If I could have just one wish,
up amongst the glitter and deep blue darkness
I’d wish upon a glistening star
That somehow, we would never be apart

 

If I could take the world, I would give it to you
I’d fill it with music and let the sun pour down
If I could, I’d fill it with colours like you.

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Written March 16th, 2006

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  • Twisted-illusions
    May 16, 2006
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    thanks heaps
  • cwright
    May 13, 2006
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    excellent

    A bright red sunset giving way to a starry sky, nice poem. When I sit out and watch the sunset I think of the loved ones I miss too.
  • Twisted-illusions
    April 1, 2006
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    Thankyou so much!

  • DD Sai
    March 30, 2006
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    YOU HAVE JUST BEEN BOOKEDMARKED! AWESOME, so totally awesome dude. Now that was deep.
  • Sitting
    March 17, 2006
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    wow...

    wow
    great made me want to read to the end.
    walking alone
  • Twisted-illusions
    March 16, 2006
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    thankyou so much!
  • Sunshinegf
    March 16, 2006
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    EXCELLENT LOVE PIECE
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