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The Softest Touch

My heart is touched, even in her absence-
Life's blessings suddenly surround,
Me, as thought- filled days of her.
For a love, has taken me beyond my bounds,
Of what I had imagined- the touch could be.
A quickening through my stream-
Life flowing, all controlling- within;
The lines of a pastel colored dream.
A limit on love, ever fleeing,
As her touch subtly guides-
The gentle caress deep inside,
Filled with an essence- a touch of life.

Author notes

This is written out of a re- birth of what love really is and what it can be.......thank you beautiful lady...Peace
Written February 9th, 2003

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  • Manicmuze
    February 23, 2003
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    oh, this is definately a love poem... such beautiful, heartfelt thoughts... really lovely. I'd agree with the comment above... you are for sure a romantic :-)

    I love this;

    "a touch of life."

    Excellent write, enjoyed this,
    ~ Wendy
  • DRIAdoll5
    February 15, 2003
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    Ooooh so well worded! You have alot of talent for that. It souds so elegant and beautiful. "The lines of a pastel colored dream." That is a wonderful line!
    Great write
    ~Dria~
  • Carin
    February 13, 2003
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    What grace I hear in these word to your loved one Muddy.. You have a sincere quality about you.. You are a romantic at heart.. You are Blessed.. May God Bless you even further in your writings,,,,,,,,,,,

    Carin...........