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41st - Soundless

No sound in my head...
I cannot understand this deafness...

No sound in my head...
I cannot hear your laments...

No sound in my head...
I cannot hear myself...

This deafness that arisen,
I cannot hear my own heart,
I cannot hear my own pace...

This deafness that arisen,
I cannot hear my own friends,
I cannot hear their own pace...

No sound in my head...
What I see is what I hear...

No sound in my head...
Because nobody is here.

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Written March 18th, 2006

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  • Broken Martyr
    April 9, 2006
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    i am agreeinf with BluRosePoet8488 this poem is great the simplicity gives it great effect
    keep it up
    x-Tears-x

  • BluRosePoet8488
    March 18, 2006
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    Great write

    AT,
    WOW! This is a great write. I love everything about it! The simplicity of it. This is really good, girl! Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~