Grateful
to let you know
you made me glow
I feel so true, it's good
You love me so
I want as honest as you
Remember
my empty years
they fill with night
No ones brings me light
I was filled with fears
Nobody cares
flowing with tears
each lonely day
Who knows you came along
made me strong
wipe my tears
cast away my fears
made me soar
and take a flight
with might
Thank you
for the joy
I thank you for the light
thank you
for the love you give to me
I'm stronger, mighter inside
with that love
I soar like a dove
Thank you
even you left me so
walking through
thank you
for everything you do
that I have nothing but you
I was glowing for you
Because of you
I still take the life
that is now in strife
Thank you!
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Author notes
Written March 18th, 2006
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You are such a honey
I read so many sides of you in this poem. Your depth of feeling and your gratitude. You are also a positive person which is what I love about you. BIG
well done
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Your words are like pins and needles that awakens the stimuli. The words bleed not with blood but with thoughts at the end saying...we feel what you are feeling.
On a personal note, this could have been better if you could adjust the form a bit(not the words).
Overall, a good write.
Salamat kabayan.
~VIRGOAN~
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Strong Feelings
Sometimes we feel just like this. The random line lengths makes the reader stumble along, but that adds to the feelings here, I Think. Love is what it is and it "ain't all purdy!" Sometimes you just need to shout out "Hip Hip Hurray" and other times, quiet cuddling. This is a very nice poem, The Shaker
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DEEP
Wonderful piece.
The emotions that were expressed were deeply true, longing and sad. It is what made this one very beautiful to read.
have a nice day
Sky019 -
Thank you so much grace...it is actually an adapted one but as you say I relate it also in personal level.
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Oucccccccccchhhh!!!!Hmmmmm... This is beautifully written.I could relate on a personal level. My heart goes out to you, as I know the feeling my dear! This poem is very touching and beautiful...It says everything in a very direct and poetic way... it made me picture the situation and feel the emotions but we all need to focus on things of change, things we adore, things that make us happy and look forward while still keeping the memories alive because the past is not erasable. It is what shapes us into who we are today but hope things will getting better..Keep up the good work!
GRACE -
Great
Wow great what kind of nice idea....I like what you doing...very nice...i dont have any words to say but great....very great nung....
Continue making poems....be the best as you can be...I appreciate you most as a very great big brother of whom when you are there you make me rely on you...because of you my vocation grows and developed....
Thank you once again for your great time youve spent...telling me about seminary life your true....Ever greatful manung NENE!!!
Best Regards,
Herd'z -
Thank you so much for the appreciation.I'm really grateful of it.
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it's a rare for a guy to write something like this...the words are filled with honest gratefulness and joy deep within...
this is a great write
Anna Lee
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this is a nice, joyful tribute--I enjoyed reading it!
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So many people will relate to this poem. I hope they all remember to thank who they need to.
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I feel this is a wonderful expression of thankfulness for a person who helped you through the throes of a dark time in your time, perhaps a depression. One can feel so alone going through something like that, so when another reaches out and is able to show you the way toward the light again, it is indeed a wondrous thing for which you should be grateful. You've expressed your emotions very well. Nicely done ~ Natasha
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Who knows you came along
made me strong
wipe my tears
cast away my fears
made me soar
and take a flight
with might
so enlighten words indeed touching its great meaning with..
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