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RIP My New Angel

I don't know what happen
Nor why God decided to take you home
But our hearts ache for your presence
And our bodies are so weak

It seems so unfair
No warning, No signs
Out of nowhere you went away
Your soul fading from your body

It breaks my heart to know
The only Dad I ever really had
Is gone...
Is this a nightmare?

I'll leave flowers on your grave,
and letters in your chair.
I'll tell you "I love you" before bed,
And Good morning when I awake.

I'll never be able to bring you back,
I would if I could.
Papa I'll miss you,
and think of you every-time I enter your room.

Author notes

My Gradfather died yestarday morning, and it's really hard for my family. Everyone crying, everyone just so exhausted. People have been bring by food, and sitting with my Grandmother a lot, but it's still hard. My Grandfather can *never* be replaced. You know? Yellow and green are his favoriet colors for Green Bay Packers. He's from WI and that's their foot ball team.

RIP Angel... I love you Papa
Written March 19th, 2006

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  • BleedingCrimson
    February 2, 2007
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    Awe....

    I like it a lot. There's a lot of emotion. I like it. good job


  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    May 5, 2006
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    Oh my goodness Sweetie. I know how hard it is to lose someone close to you and all I cna think to say is I'm sorry. But I'm sure you're tired of hearing that. Just remember that he's in a happier place and that he's not suffering anymore. I don't know how he died, nor do I want to. I'm here to confort if you need a shoulder to cry on (figuratively speaking of course). But darling, if you need someone to talk to or just need someone to listen, IM me on here and I'll listen. I may be a stranger, but sometimes, that's all someone truly needs. Someone they don't know, who won't judge on anything, and will just listen contently. Keep up the beautiful work and take care.

    Love, Lullaby Here's a rose and a few of these.
  • BrainStorm
    April 12, 2006
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    Inspiring

    Wow..Your good...

  • ForbiddenDesires
    April 1, 2006
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    Sad :(

    awwwwwww babe this is sad.. these things suck. Man they couldnt suck more. Im so sorry you have to endure this pain. Believe me I know how it is. Im sorry babe and im here if you ever need me and you know it babe! XOXO

  • poetryality silver member
    March 21, 2006
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    I am so sorry to hear of your loss. I can tell by these words that your grandfather was a beacon of light to you. Look towards that light in fond memories and hold his spirit near, always.

    Much Love,
    Renee

  • leander gold member
    March 20, 2006
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    It's always very hard to deal with when you lose a familymember - the fact you are so close to him makes it so hard sorry to hear this hunny



  • Always Deena
    March 19, 2006
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    I am so sorry to hear of your loss.
    Many prayers,
    Deena

  • EidolonDesires
    March 19, 2006
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    hey beautiful, i am so sorry to hear this, it seems like everyone is loosing someone....i mean sara lost ck, you lost your papa, and my uncle by marriages brother just died like two days ago, and i knew him, not well, but it still made me cry....idk,.....loss is hard....I wish there was something i could say to make it better, but i am afraid i have nothing.....
    luv you....
    ~Chris~

  • Sirpun360LK
    March 19, 2006
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    I KNOW ALL TO WELL THE FEELING OF LOSING SOME U LOVE AND OR CARE FOR.I WISH U ALL THE BEST AND UR FAMILE TOO.
    IT IS A GOOD POEM!
    take good care of ur self!
  • lostsouls12
    March 19, 2006
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    i am so sorry hugs but i know he is watching over you making sure you get everything your heart desires. i am here if you need anything.
  • Silence360LQ
    March 19, 2006
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    I am so sorry for your loss. This is a very sad but he is in a better place I'm sure you are tired of hearing that. Just think though he will always be with you and around you. He will watch over you now. I'll send you a big hug.
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