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I
Fell fast
Into your heart.
The ether of music
Wended throughout
Each emanation from the
Blushing flood of passions,
Imprisoned and so near death.
Surrealistic paintings
Of the past's angers and doubts
Slid down panes of
Melting glass
And crumbling walls,
Into this
Cup.
I
Held up
My hands to grasp the delicate beauty
Of each blended line that lay between
The you and me, the us
Sublime.
Where you are
I am
Forever faint with expectation,
Pulse unhesitant to alter its beat,
Breaths moist and hot.
Give me your lips,
Let me eat your thoughts and
Drink your desire.
Sail across my lust with your power and
Conquer the waves of my passionate need
For complete surrender.
Let us touch,
Fingertip to fingertip,
The gentle stroke of love.
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Author notes
Written February 10th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- I want a love poem. But not a cliche one, something at least a little original or strange. by Earlbecke.
100 points, ended February 21, 2003, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks. I had changed the way that line read and somehow (I can't believe I did that) I managed to miss that word! I am soooo embarrassed! *Big smile*
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AMAZING. This fits the challenge wonderfully, and is sooo well written. You only had one typo I noticed: "Pulse unhesitant to alter it's beat," where it's should be "its."
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