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When it Reaches It's End

Love has lost me.
left me behind to wither away,
nothing is left for me.
The key to my heart,
shattered upon the floor,
I stay locked up.
Don't blame yourself,
its not your fault,
only mine,
for not being good enough.
I am lost without words.
no one left to confide in.
no point to stay.
No where to go,
except away,
so now I leave,
empty handed.
This is where I meet,
the end of the road.
This is where,
it all ends.

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Written March 25th, 2006

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  • Closet Poet
    March 26, 2006
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    this is a fantastic write my friend. its quite sad, you are accepting, as FalseDisposition said, a mistake you've made, but its one thats causing you pain... sorry about whats hapened, i know when i muck up things, which is alot, it hurts so much, the after effects, but thats sorta... yeah "you reap what you sow" ...it sucks.. but sometimes theres the feeling where you think, "omg, what have i done, i deserve all this..." and put it all on yourself... which isnt so good for your health... you have to try and forgive yourself, and say, you have to move on. its tough, but the stress is worse, of carrying it all the time. its a great write, really loved it, and related... lol. thanks for sharing, closet

  • TrueAmbition
    March 25, 2006
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    I seriously wish everyone could accept their mistakes...And take the blame every once in a while...but that's so rare to find...Hardly anyone does it anymore... it's kinda sad...But I'm glad you did.