Dance for us
Feel how the waves dance
tickling her feet to entice
her to dance for them.
Author notes
A Pixiku is
5
7
5 syllables
on any subject.
A Laurie snow Heinz painting
Written March 26th, 2006
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A contest entry
- Pixiku ~ Image~ by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended March 29, 2006, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The wave do move in a dance like sort of way and the young girl seems to be enticed by the motion and longs to dance along with it. This was a very cptivating write and thank you for commenting to my poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Avril
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very creative little piece waves on the shore like that is very inviting isn't
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Very intriguing...I like that notion...of the waves enticing her. I guess they do have that power, especially to a child. Moxie does that for me.
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This is quite a clever little piece ~ Very creative and lovely. Thanks so much for this entry... x
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Thank you for entering your lovely piece Josephine
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