~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~
Vows cast upon waters flowing quickly,
The depth hidden from human thoughtful
Perception.
Strands of sound bites floating free,
Elusive to those searching for the revelation,
The mystery of existence.
What was, is now
Vows made with sincerity
Without mental footnotes or reservations,
Offered for an eternity cast upon the sea,
An immersion in the scheme of living.
Swim in the crystal waves lapping at your heart.
Soak in the sparkling sun glowing warmth,
The moonlight that speaks of passion,
Accept love's promise to you.
Author notes
Written February 14th, 2003
In a list
What did you think
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
I love the way you worded this!!!! It lovely!!!! ~Laura
-
awww
i dont think this could get any better
very heartfelt and true!
i love the beauty you shine!
well done sprite!
ashes -
perfect
you have the most sentimental heart I have ever read
and it thrills me to know love for you is this grand,
almost story book beautiful or even better! -
very beautiful Sprite
drowning
and washed by the salt within
the waves of love
very purty -
beautiful soothing eventuality where love lives it's own life once created and we are washed with the current along lifes path determined by the flow and depth and any debri that fate floats in our direction
very lovely
:] -
It is such a beautiful poem from a special romantic heart.
dear lady,
jim -
Ahhh, so beautiful, flows just like the gentle waves in the backdrop of sea or lake water. You are such a romantic! Did I ever tell you that? Love to you! Always!
--Kelly
-
i really like this...great analogy/metaphor...i also liked the ending and last few lines. It's sweet
-
Lovely
Lovely write of unity and
your last three lines I liked feels relaxing....
) Hugs my friend, Sherry
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
