Setting here with nothing to do.
Wondering what people do?
How do they live like they do?
Wondering if they know or just want to hide.
The fact the one day were all going to die.
We don't know when, and we don't know how.
All we know is that it's going to come around.
So I'm letting you know just be prepared.
We don't know when and we don't how.
All we know is that were all going to go somehow.
Author notes
Written March 27th, 2006
A contest entry
- Death and Insanity by BloodTintedTears.
300 points, ended March 29, 2006, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a great pome from a great mind
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yeah that is true. i like the way you wrote it, its straight to your brain
without having to wonder to mucha bout what you mean
-sancia-
VvvvvV -
mind pondering.
Okay, this is another awesome paradoxyl, mind-pondering poem that I love, but it [again] has spelling mistakes that very much take away from it. I love your work though!
.Angel. -
I like your poem, it pretty much gets right to the point. Yes, we are indeed going to die someday. Good luck in the contest!
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sorry it's is wondering, but think for telling me i'm going to go fix thaat right now. and i'm glad u liked it.
midnightgoddness -
There are definite truths here, I was a bit confused by line 4, is that supposed to be wondering instead of wounding? Nice job, good luck in the contest
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