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What is That I Hera?

What is that that i hear?
Snicking up the stairs?
Could it be one of my litter brothers?
No, there both sound asleep in my bed.
What could it be i here, snicking up thous stairs?
Could it be my pet?
No that couldn't be it..i don't have a pet.
What do i hear, snicking up thous stairs?
Could it be my parents?
No that's not right, there not here right know.
What do i Hera snicking up thous stairs?
Should i go look?
No I'm to scared.
What do i Hera snicking up thous stairs?
What's wrong with me i don't feel like i normally do?
What's wrong with me what should i do?
You know what suddenly i don't care.
No ones ever lisened to me, no one has ever loved me.
They don't care about me, way should i care about them?
You know what, I'm going to go look what it is i here coming up the stairs.
Ever so slowly i get up and look out my door.
I see nothing,but i feel something near.
What could it be that i feel so near?
I walk down stairs and i scearm in fear.
Because i know what it is i feel.
I hit the floor hopping it would past me by.
And know i know what i hear ed coming up thous stairs.
I hear ed Death coming up my stairs.
To come get me.
And take me to hell.




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Written March 27th, 2006

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  • Chaotic vixen
    March 31, 2006
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    Wow I really enjoyed this peace!!! I love the TWIST of the plot!! like how you're scarred then brave because of no love...I hope you got what I'm saying...but...uh...yeah...this one was pretty wierd but I really liked it can't wait to read more of yours!!!

    ~~Kyra~~

  • BloodSoakedSin
    March 29, 2006
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    I have a ppoem simalar to this one called death. I can totally realte to this poem. I definately fits my mood tonight. It left me with a chill running up my spine. Uber Uber Uber wonderful!!! Lovly dramatic and beautiful.
    Kelsi

  • Ms Paetow
    March 29, 2006
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    pretty awesome

    This is an amazing poem, and I love it, but it has a great many spelling mistakes which very much take away from the poem. If you don't know how to spell something [dictionary.com] might help you? But yeah, great poem, i really love it.

    .Angel.

  • Flo Varekai
    March 28, 2006
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    Interesting poem. It leave you wondering whats coming up the stairs, so you keep on reading. It's good that you can keep the reader's attention. The flow was good in some parts and alittle rough in others, but other than that it was good. I thin you could go alittle more with the death part. Like use alittle imagery there. Just a suggestion. But yeah, It was very uber good! Hehehe, I should go read more of yours! wheeee!