Love
People say love isn't always
a bed of roses
Love is a bed of roses
it's just a lot of us fall
right into the thorns
Author notes
My friend and I was talking about love and I said the top bit he said the bottom
Written April 3rd, 2006
What did you think
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That is so true. Some people have difficulties with falling in love, or if they do, well, it's not the right love for them. I love the analogy you used. It is simple, but yet it says a lot. Good job.
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I like this alot. It is a very lovely and very truthful poem. The simple wisdom is perfect.
Mike
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great analogy!
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Oh how true your words that you wrote. Love is hard, but love is what we need in our lives to proceed to live true happiness. Thank you for sharing. ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Wonderful words you have put out here. All that are so true. You nailed it! In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Aww thats cute. And dark. But i mean its soo true. I can relate. Most everyone can relate. Great job! =]
<3
Ramona -
Thank you so much for your comments they mean a lot very much appreciated and thanks for the applause
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Neat. Provokes a string of memories with an economy of words.
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Thank you so much for your comments they are much appreciated
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Thank you so much for your comments they are very much appreciated. glad you liked this piece :0
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Oh wow! I loved this so very true! It's short but it's powerful and straight to the point. Awesome job and keep it up.
~Morbid[♥] -
*chuckles* How true that is... there's the beauty, and the danger lurking beneath, and how some of us forget that to every bright, shiny thing, there's the prick of danger somewhere...
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much appreciated thanks for comments
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Thanks for comments very much appreciated
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I don't think I could agree more! This is an awesome piece of poetry for it states only the truth! I just might add that falling into the bed of thorns isn't always your own fault, either. There are those who literally push you headfirst into them!
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A tad bit cliche, but that last line really works. I do like that you went straight to the heart of the matter, so not to clutter this up with so much unneeded words. Pretty good, all in all.
Best wishes
Meli -
Thank you so much
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I love it !!!!!
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Thanks hun means a lot
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wonderfully written...
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Thanks hun means a lot thanks for reading and commenting too
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small, yet u get the point across....what a point....
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Thank you so much for your comments they mean a lot much appreciated xxx
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hey thought id check out a few of your poems
haha this is so true! i find this a very good example of 'quality over quantity'
love it
-viv
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BADABOOM.....Right on the nose...Well done, I love it.
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wow this is a truely great piece its not easy to some up love into a few lines
ya know
great job keep up the good work
Faith -
fnatastic. the thought you have conveyed in this few lines, its just amazing. this is fabulous work. keep it up.
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you have made a very impactive little piece here, another viewpoint might be that love is a bed of roses but along with the flower heads come the thorns, just like with a rose you know the thorns are there so take care to avoid them, in love the thorns are there but we look only to the rose and therefore often find ourselves snagged on the thorns, well done on this one, Broad
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omg, i love the impact of this poem, its hits you like a solid heavy rock, very short, but very strong. love it!
Wish You The Best,
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SOOO TRUE!!! I loved it and especially the end!! It was to the point and it was full of truth!! great write!
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Short, to the point, and wonderfully written... I love it. It is very true what you have written here...
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Thanks for your comments glad you liked it. Much appreciated xxx
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I like it. It's short and to the point. It offers a different view on love that not many people would think of. I also like the line breaks you added. Well done!
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awesome
smiles...love the twist. love it.
you know what the best part of being cut is, though....
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when the lights dim
and dinner comes in
his lover is on the couch
becareful!!...ouch!!!
so he sits down beside her...
and like a lion licks his fur
he applies that healing lotion ..that balm
that loving touch that brings, sweet, soothing calm.
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by Lionslove.
excellent idea. so well done.
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i think love can b painfula aswell as a bed of roses. love is supposed 2 b perfect but love can b nice. great poem from irenexxxx
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