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Spring Haiku

The wind playing games,
(like little children in spring),
with my hair; lazy.

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Written April 6th, 2006

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  • teeth like war
    April 11, 2006
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    This is beautiful....simple, the way haikus always are. Vivid, gets lots of emotion across with only a few sylablles. Great job.

  • ShadyLass
    April 7, 2006
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    You're welcome.
    ~Amanda~
  • ProdigalPoet
    April 6, 2006
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    Thanks! I know you switched your name, somehow I wasn't notified of your comment, but I found it yesterday. I hope I'll be more active now.

  • ShadyLass
    April 6, 2006
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    I love the feeling of the wind whipping through my hair. Cute write.
    ~Amanda~ (formerly known as HauntedRose)