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my only friends

i have some problems
that id like to solve.
my only friends here
gun and a blade,
this blade i think is leaving
so ill have to part,
as a last memory
ill cut out my heart.
like i can feel anymore,
only if i pretend,
so that's when the gun comes in
to finish what i started,
he only needs a bullet,
and why not carve on it
the words that drive me crazy,
'i love you'
and please don't remove it,
or you will ruin the whole plan
to die with only love in mind
goodbye and goodnight.
maybe i should bring my noose along to,
so someone can catch my fall.

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Written April 7th, 2006

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  • silent pain16
    July 18, 2006
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    AWSOME!!

    I loved this poem. I think this is one of the best i have read. keep up the good work!
  • Just Listen
    April 8, 2006
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    ha. i wonder if your secret friend was the first to read this. i also wonder if she was there if she would give the perfect hug, and be the perfect girl you always wanted. even if i wanted to, I could never be her. i read the lyrics of the perfect girl. maybe thats me, i wouldn't know. i hope to know the secret soon...
    love you so much tyler,
    i know you say i love you is a lie and fake,
    but some girls they mean it with every part of their heart...
    ok I'll shut up now.
    Gin
    I'm scared to be her though.