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Elemental...Emotional

Towering mountains
Of sturdy muscle and blood
Sinew body and iridescent scales
Majestic creatures
Full of grace and beauty
Intelligent
Terrifying beast
Full of greed and fury
Emotional
Fire or ice
Elemental eaters
Elemental users
Air or sea
Current riders
Current swimmers
Flying machines
Fire breathers
Treasure guardians
Dragons

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Option 2
I like to describe not make a story.
Written April 10th, 2006

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  • SageSyren
    July 28, 2006
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    That was my favorite line also. I wrote the whole poem around that. If you think about it dragons are exactly that. They use the air to fly, the fire to keep themselves warm and for defense. If they are waterdragons then of course water. And they live in caves of mountains. I love dragons. So powerful.
    Thanks for reading.
    ~Syren~

  • SageSyren
    July 28, 2006
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    Thanks NL. They are very popular now adays, but I've loved them since I was a child (me being older than well lets just say old). lol
    ~Syren~

  • grassisgreener
    July 28, 2006
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    You have quite a gift for unique imagery! I love the "elemental eaters" line.

  • Night-lord
    June 2, 2006
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    well-done

    Dragons are the most popular fantasy creatures ever and you have descibed them beautifully, well-done
  • reddragonlady
    May 2, 2006
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    It's wicked and so true lol.
    i just adore them they are so majestic and free...

  • -MrsWonka-
    April 19, 2006
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    no problem. i do, i draw them quite alot. i have done quite a few fantasy poems, unicorns, dragons etc. it's nice to do.

  • SageSyren
    April 18, 2006
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    Thank you for commenting. And I'm glad it reminds you of drawing. Do you draw them often. I just love dragons. I've never written about them (except for this) but would love to.

  • -MrsWonka-
    April 18, 2006
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    this is good, reminds me of what i think of when i draw my dragons ^-^

  • SageSyren
    April 11, 2006
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    I didn't think about that. But you're right...study-sturdy.

  • Master Warious
    April 11, 2006
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    I love dwarves too but I didn't think of it. Next time I shall!
    Muahahahahahaha.
    Thank you for fixing the mistake. It wouldn't show up on any spell ckeck because 'study' is a correctly spelled word. (I have this sort of problem all the time. #^_^# )

  • SageSyren
    April 11, 2006
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    Thanks. Just love dragons and dwarves. Too bad their weren't included. I did change study to sturdy. Sorry about that. I did the spell check lol

  • Master Warious
    April 11, 2006
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    Well done

    Vell done, vell done. You do describe dragons very vell.
    (but 'sturdy' isn't spelled 'study'. Do feel free to make spelling corrections and/or additions if you feel it needs them. I vill be re-reading all poems before making my final decision.
    Thank you for entereing and good luck in the contest.
    Well done.
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