Upon the lips of my dream
Await moist hues of you
As swaying lavender surrounds
My porcelain princess sighs
With fallen drops
I cleanse my soul
Anew like the horned foal
Then comes the time
When all is held
From the duckling
To the swan
Beauty bounds with echoes
Against the rapture
Of the mystic
Fallen are the tears
That melt into the sea
Sanctifying my love
Lovers we shall be
Brighter than sun or moon
Filaments capture your frame
And live with the breeze
Shrouded in the mist of you
Are eyes that tell the tale
With a droplet dripping down
From the clouds of Heaven
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Written April 12th, 2006
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"Beauty bounds with echoes
Against the rapture
Of the mystic
Fallen are the tears
That melt into the sea
Sanctifying my love
Lovers we shall be"
Wondrous penning, Richard...Lovely picture, too...I kinda like the swans... 
Good luck in the contest, my Friend...Loves my Muddy, I do, I do...
Wanderer
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Ahh! This was a breath of fresh air, Muddy. So serene, a tranquil mirage. Sounds like love.
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You got that right hugs back atja blues man
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Your poem is a well fitted companion to the posted image. I enjoyed too, the word images you used to create the scene. This is one case where the image detracted from the poem. The imagination is a far better painter than any portrait and you provided magical paint for the mind.
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One has to be a romantic to play the blues....lol
hugs
Peace Muddy -
Wow Mud, I don't think I've ever seen this side of you ... the romantic unicorn
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Wow..this is beautiful..and I love how you entwined love into this. Amazing imagery..and you really made the photo come to life within your words. Excellent job and keep it up.
~Morbid[♥] -
Sweet
Really awesome poem! -
This was amazing!! And the picture is beautiful also. Your words are so beautiful and it was just really good.
Best of luck in the contest!!!
~*~ Danielle ~*~ -
Very nice. You have a typo here:
Upon the lips of my dream
Awaits moist hues of you (Await moist hues of you)
hues is plural so it would be "Await".
Anyway, good job on the poem and good luck in the contest.
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great
muddy, once again a stunningly beautiful piece. You used some wonderful imagery in this. You possess an abilty to write in a way that is almost as mystical as it is beautiful. very good write my friend. image and Visions -
I just went to visit you page and I see you are also from Kentucky...Mt Sterling here
thanks for your kind comment
have a wonderful day
Peace Muddy -
Definatly a piece of fantasy in this write. Great images:Upon the lips of my dream
That is so strong.
Also:Shrouded in the mist of you
Are eyes that tell the tale
With a droplet dripping down
From the clouds of Heaven
This whole stanza is good.
Great job, good luck in the contest. -
Lovely graphic you have created here to go along with this wonderfully romantic flowing poem. A kind of mystic, fantasy like quality to it all.
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great write, love your style.
i think its great when a poem is based on a picture because we can actually SEE instead of makig our own picture in our minds..
you seem to be a great writer, i hope you do/did well in the contest.
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this is good, alot people can paint pictures with words,
But so few can turn a pictures into words.
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Great
How beautiful!
It has that wonderful loving air, very breezy and soft. It really is something that has a very cherishing aura to it.
I love how it was a very medieval, druidic, fantasy wonderment to it. It's a wonderful symblance of love and all the things surrounding it. -
What a gorgeous love poem!!! Such beautiful and breath taking imagery!!! I loved reading this and I think you really did a wonderful job with it! I really hope it does well in the contest
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Your word choice in this piece was amazingly well put together. The reader's mind flows nicely through the poem as it's read. I really like the feel of it, very dream-like.
Shrouded in the mist of you
Are eyes that tell the tale
With a droplet dripping down
From the clouds of Heaven
Those were my favorite lines of the piece. Definitely leaves you thinking. -
the poem was lovely, but certainly not what i expected with that title. and the picture freaks me out, but that's just me...
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Beautiful piece here. The title made me think this would be a little different, but it still worked out. Keep on writing.
Blessed be,
LeFay -
OOO i love the nature mixed with the seduction!! AWSOME and ROMANTIC!! I love it!!!
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Is that a picture of Barbie lol?
"Fallen are the tears
That melt into the sea
Sanctifying my love
Lovers we shall be."
Nice stanza. I saw some good wording, which is a plus. Overall twas' good. Keep penning MuddyKing!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker who lost all aka Sacred Shadows -
Bringing the reader to a lovely seduction. Bravo!
Very lovely!
Carissa
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thanks Red, hope all is well
hugs
Peace Muddy -
Oh this is lovely Muddy!
Red
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