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Stupid

Stupid words,
stupid friends,
stupid boys.
So this is how it ends?

Stupid me,
stupid you.
Stupid us.
Could this be true?

Stupid lies,
stupid heart.
Stupid thing
to tear us apart.

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I can't believe I told Quinn how I felt.
Written April 12th, 2006

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  • SandTrisha
    December 7, 2007
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    Yes sometimes frustration shines out brightly. It isn't ever really stupid to tell someone your feelings...probably a smart thing as by doing this you will have the answers your heart needs. Loved your poem, it is excellent in the expressions and emotions, and captures the reader into it. ~blessings always~ Trisha


  • N-everLasting-Hate
    July 29, 2007
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    friggin talk to me sometime
  • Kare Child
    January 12, 2007
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    May I ask who the fuck you are? Especially when you get on and cuss me out over something you know nothing about. I have a wonderful little xanga too... Leave me a fucking message there... www.xanga.com/BloodSugarIce

    Gwen

  • Autumn Raine
    April 13, 2006
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    i know where youre comin from babe
    trust me


  • Demented falcon
    April 13, 2006
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    Nice write. You got your point across to me in a short poem. And that takes tallent.

    -Amanda
  • IrrefutableBliss
    April 12, 2006
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    Thanks.

  • N-everLasting-Hate
    April 12, 2006
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    unique...nice flow and a nice plot.keeps me wondering...
  • IrrefutableBliss
    April 12, 2006
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    A-men. Thanks Aahos, your comments mean the world to me.

  • aahos faos
    April 12, 2006
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    it is all the stupid shit that tears people apart , it allways happens. i feel alot of frustration behind this , im full of that anxious frustration so i can really relate to the mood of this.
  • IrrefutableBliss
    April 12, 2006
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    Thanks a lot.
  • IrrefutableBliss
    April 12, 2006
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    Thanks.
  • IrrefutableBliss
    April 12, 2006
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    Heh... thanks.

  • ShadowFox
    April 12, 2006
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    This was great..

  • UnderTheWeepingMoon silver member
    April 12, 2006
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    This is so true, and I can relate to this so easily. Kinda good to know I'm not the only one.
  • Eusebius
    April 12, 2006
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    Love it!

    I love it! Love it! Love it!
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