People are like stained glass windows
better, when all is dark
and they are lit from within.
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Written April 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- ~Pixiku~ Your words... by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended April 18, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww that was so good even for just a couple of lines i like it alot
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Strong message in these three short lines........captured nicely........best of luck in the contest........
Leance
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This is an incedible pixiku ~ such powerful words... x Thanks so much for this entry... x
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very profound thought Kethry I like the feel of its see through the inner light protruding outwardly......very insightful.....
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Malabu -
pretty image in three lines, Kethry! strangely enough, I was working on a poem thought dealing with stained glass images earlier today which I don't know will ever come around, but I did pick up an beautiful stained glass image if you want to attach it to this poem. let me know, and if you do, I'll attach it to a post and leave you a link where you can click it up for yourself, OK?
best wishes to you in the contest!
Jo
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